Talk:Average Customer/@comment-27730508-20190304063954

This review was conducted on March 4th, 2019.

Grammar/Spelling: I fixed most of the mistakes on this pasta, but someone should notify me if I missed something.

General Story: Interesting, although it is a bit on the short side. If you added to this pasta it would probably score higher in my book. The concept doesn't seem cliche, but it doesn't seem as plausible as some of the other pastas I've seen on here (Note: all creepypastas are fake.). Your computer's background changing is one of the cliches that sticks out above the rest, and is the most noteable in the story.

Final Score: 5.8/10