Talk:Subliminal Broadcasting/@comment-83.134.207.211-20150825183828

I felt like you only scratched the surface. All you did was explain the situation and concept, but you didn't tell us how being hungry or sick fits with murder. This leans more to an explanation of the concept of a (pretty much unwritten) story than an actual story. I love the concept, but please explore it more. 6/10.