Talk:Arenu // One NightmareSmile // Two NightmareSmile/@comment-38827694-20190627101123

Wordy sentences. punctations... Grammar, spellings. That's the issue on every creepypasta I saw daily on RCW. And not even a single introduction. Introducing yourself before Telling the story would be awfully much better, Than saying "Omg guYs ik u dont knOw me but heres the StoRy hippity dippity"

Any than that. Do not miss your English lessons