Talk:The Watcher/@comment-27730508-20171222154132

Though I don’t find it that creepy, although I think you could have potential to be a great writer. First thing is first, space words between periods. (Ex: Instead of “The Roblox Creepypasta Wiki was a cool place for writers.It shut down in 2029.” It’s  "The Roblox Creepypasta Wiki was a cool place for writers. It shut down in 2029.") Also, less use of (...) except for in dialogue, because it could show how the character is speaking. Finally, maybe change “Little did they know” to something else?