Talk:Searching Myself/@comment-28527909-20160730183311

Pretty decent, there were the usual cliches. The ending and beginning didn't exactly draw in the reader, but the story was alright. The end of the story made me question it a bit because most creepypastas don't end with everything becoming perfect again. I recommend you work on removing cliches and developing your ideas a bit further in future stories.

5.5/10