Talk:Ferrnar/@comment-37258173-20181023183313

I don't really like this story. The plot is a bit confusing. I know this is your first pasta, but at least remove the meaning less video you have added, which did not have anything to do with this story.

It doesn't seem like you've put much effort into this, considering you didn't even remove the, "Write the first section of your page here." line.

Please update this. It seems pretty scary for a creepypasta, so I'm looking forward to reading the improved version of this.