Talk:You have been kicked from this game: Null values/@comment-36145153-20180902090120

Analysis

Grammar: 7/10. It started off looking likes walls of text, but I got used to it and it wasn't very bad.

Plot: 5/10. The plot felt very generic, whilst also feeling very confusing. Should I feel proud for something using this many emotions?

Empathy: 8/10. Some description about the way the character was feeling was very good, and not something you'd normally see in a creepypasta.

Thrill: 9/10. This story was very scary if I do say so myself!

Final Score: 7.2/10. I'd recommend this....