Talk:Smile.exe/@comment-36530255-20190102194809

I don't get how people consider this one of the best stories on this wiki. Not trying to be mean or anything. Here's my reveiw:

Plot: 5% Quick paced, short.

Grammar: 20% Its okay, but the descriptions are lazily written out which is one reason why this story is super short.

Cliché: 20% I understand this is a very early ROBLOX creepypasta so the bloody smiles and stuff weren't considered cliché at the time.

Overall score: 45%