Talk:Don't Join/@comment-33643486-20200304021120

First of all, what's with the file end stuff, it was never mentioned that it was a text document or a blog post, even though it's really a nip-pick. Second of all there is some heavy use of cliches in this story, like "I was a idiot back then." Or the heavy use of death. Also, I feld like the story would've be better if we focused on nim more, it just tells like a waste of portental. Over all this story is mediocre, 6.26/10