Talk:A Pitch Black Room/@comment-36226305-20190227094735

𝙈𝙮 𝙤𝙥𝙞𝙣𝙞𝙤𝙣:

Pluses (+)

+ Ok. So, this pasta is really interesting at the beginnig, and I almost couldn´t get my eyes out from the screen till I finish it.

+ Grammar is really good.

Minuses (-):

- There are not any "proof" photos, or at least some edited photos that look like proofs.

- The beginning was a bit fast, you were just randomly playing and suddenly that happened. Nothing happened before that?

𝙏𝙤𝙩𝙖𝙡 𝙧𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜: 8,5/10 (Very good)

Please check my story too, thanks.

Link to my profile and to the story on my profile, thanks.