Talk:CR1M1S0N/@comment-27730508-20171109055459

The line spacing gives me a "holy hell" mindset because of the fact that it is not neccessary to indent that many times. You should indent using at most 4 lines of fully filled columns of text instead of this. Its like if I did this:

If you dont have time to read this comment, read the tl;dr below.

Hey dude.

Hi.

I'm coming over soon, so is he?

Yes, he is.

Though this may be a style choice and as shown in the comments below you haven't been on this wikia for ages, as the last comment was made on July 22 by KoolKidz112ver2. Also shown below you have edited it, and according to your comment you made 3 hours ago, and the site page history, there is a huge difference between http://robloxcreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/CR1M1S0N?oldid=36143 and the current page revision.

Hope you get better at writing sooner, as this comment is not to be taken as a comment just to hate on you, but as what we here on the wikia call constructive critisim. Don't be like this person, who didn't care about my helpful comments on bit as shown in one of his comment sections, specifically this one and this comment, which shows complete ignorance to my previously made comments beforehand.

I hope a new returner like you can be welcomed in this community and not harassed or frowned upon like many here might be, or be bullied for having this pasta. My rule of thumb? Keep trying. Don't give up.

-~Jobie

- Builderx22

-JoeBee James

-J.B.J

-J.J.B.

-A nice person

P.S.:

TL;DR: Don't give up, decent story, welcome!

P.S. AGAIN:

Bone Apetit  is not the one whom is ignorant, it is DiamondRacer7.