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Another example of a bad story:

The guests revenge

so i was playing my favorite game of all time which was called jailbreak. it was a few days after the guest removal so there shouldn't be a guest inside the game. but when i got in i saw a hacker guest that had a bloody smile. the guest killed everyone in the server except me and i was so scared. the guest went close to me but the game shutdown and it was insane. i went in my room and there was blood on the wall saying "your next" and that made me more scared. so i went to bed and had a nightmare about the guest.

the next day i got into roblox and the guest was the only friend on my friends list. he said "your going to die soon" and i didnt know what to do. i tried to unfriend him but it didnt work and i was about to die. the guest was in my room and said "im going to kill you" and he was holding a knife. he killed me and i was dead.

now i am a ghost and i hope you enjoyed this story.

The story doesn't exist, I was showing it for an example.