Talk:Lillian/@comment-34732846-20180318091203

Based on my judgement, I have the following:

Grammar: 10/10. The conversation doesn't matter.

Creepiness: 5/10. The reason why it isn't creepy is because my mom tells me that all the time.

Effort: 10/10. We like it.

Extras: 1/10. You have only one extra, which is the moral lesson, but great job anyway! Kids should read this.

All in All: 95%. Although you didn't get the 100% total, this was awesome!