Talk:Mega Smasher/@comment-34979284-20180910135041/@comment-34979284-20180910141156


 * sigh*

- 'i' should ALWAYS be capatalized.

- Your periods are in the wrong places.

- You write 'And' after periods. (Which is not wrong, but usually, you only write 'and' after commas.)

- Letters at the beginning of each sentence should be capatalized......

- There is literally a space between almost every one of your sentences.

Like this:

I went to the store.

Then I went back home.

After that, I watched TV.

And so on...

- You don't put a comma after 'and'. You can put a comma after 'after that' / 'and then' and some more, but not like this:

"I went to the store. And, I bought new clothes."

It should be: "I went to the store, and I bought some new clothes."

AND MUCH MUCH MORE.

What do you mean 'lame' analysis. I'm a reader, which means I can judge a story. And for me, the story was too confusing.

"Sorry, but lame analysis. Especially in the Grammatical error part. I didnt have any grammatical error."

There was literally a grammatical error in THAT sentence. It should be, "I didn't (not didnt) have any grammatical errors (not error). You can't say, I don't have much errors, or I don't have any error.