Talk:Roblox 2003/@comment-31746069-20170415105232

My Conclusions:

Grammar : 9/10

Plot : 7/10 I feel that it's unrealistic how builderman replied. Like, You send him a corrupted and scary pictures and he replied back it's roblox in 2003 which is really unrealistic, also roblox started in mid 2004, not 2003.

Scariness : 6/10 Woah, that robloxian and page error one got me, but otherwise, it's not scary at all.

Total Score : 22/30

It's pretty good by the way, keep up the good work ;)