Talk:EvitageNatas/@comment-39442597-20200909004200

7.3/10

For the positive side of the story it provides itself with a significant amount of context in addition with its ability to draw the reader in with plot development. I like how real life was blended in with this one as well, since it states that the unnamed narrator has been haunted by an apparition as a result of what they experienced. This also makes it progressively more dark than other conventional stories, such as Red World.

For the negative side there are slight cliches in the story, mainly involving backwards writing and the usage of a scream. However the partially immense detail later reverts this.

Overall this was a decently good story since it was short but to the point. I Elias enjoyed how the author detailed the events happening afterwards, especially since I actually had a similar to the one described in the story. It also maintained a better type of structure which was based on description and representation, which adds to its own solidity. This was pretty good, however more detail and context needs to be attached to the story’s core, so in other words practice makes perfect.