Talk:Card Code/@comment-26569846-20151104105330

TL;DR This is simply about a kid who gets some strange Roblox card, uses it, then strange stuff happens, next, a demon comes out and chases them. Finally, the police come, and the demon vanishes and he burns the card.

Re Review: This pasta was actually good in my opinion. The only problems was a kinda un-realistic, rushy ending. But, this was actually pretty good. It was long enough as well.

My rating would be 8.5 out of 10.

Writing Tip: If you're too tired to think of a good ending, it's always good to take a break.