The Intruder Incident

Information about 'The Intruder'Let's start, shall we?

The Intruder's appearance was this shadow-looking figure that seemed they were wearing a hood. He had an odd face, it was creepy. I had looked on the internet, it says The Intruder has a human form and a demon form. People had seen this thing before.
 * 1) He only lurks within darkness.
 * 2) He doesn't have an official name, so I thought the best name for it was The Intruder.

= Chapter 1 INTRUDER = I was watching TV when I heard knocking at the door. I answered the door. I saw him. The Intruder. With that same creepy face.

He looked human-like, but, something was very wrong. It felt that way. As I saw him walk through the darkness of my own house. I heard a faint scream, coming from my attic. My vision was blurry, but, I could make out one thing. The face of that thing I saw.

I tried to run away. But, it was no use. I had to make a decision, and fast. So, I decided to go up into the attic.

I walked up the creaky attic floorboard steps, I saw my brother in there. He was screaming. All he did was repeat the same thing as if it was rewinding and playing.

I couldn’t make it out. I heard a screech in my left ear. It was that intruder. His face curved into a smirk. I tried my best to escape. But, no luck.

I was trapped. It was like I was in hell. I wanted to be free. Free from everything.

The Intruder slowly came up the stairs. My heart pounded. I thought I was going to die. But, I had to be brave.

I ran down the creaky steps. Quickly. I went downstairs. The power suddenly went out. I could hear more screaming from my brother. Then, it stopped. He was dead on the floorboards. That made me cry. My little brother was gone.

I believe that I was gonna be the next victim. Will my family live? I had to check. That thing chased me through the basement door. I had never been in the basement.

It was dusty. It smelled rank. The walls were dank and they looked dirty like in the 80s. It was all wrong for me. I was starting to feel scared.

I turned a corner. I saw The Intruder, standing there. He was stalking me. I heard a screech. I was very afraid. Was he going to get me?

At that point, he lunged toward me. Before he could even reach me. I quickly blacked out I saw Jesus himself and he said"Wake up". I woke up in a Hospital.

The doctors said that I’d been in a coma for 3 days I was thinking but how? But I was glad to be alive. At least, I was living.

I haven’t told anyone about this. Until now.

= Chapter 2, "FEAR" = Right after I walked out of the hospital I decided to go home. While I was on my way to the house I found this odd-looking abandoned mansion. I thought about exploring the mansion, I went inside and I saw a picture. Under the photo, there was messy writing saying "Jonathan J. Henderson" I thought about the image and then I realized it looked identical to 'The Intruder. I was trembling in fear

Was he the one that killed my little brother? I thought to myself. I decided to go up the stairs. While I walking up the stairs one of the steps broke in half. I fell and felt terrified everywhere inside my body. My vision had blurred. I saw a shadow coming closer to me every second. I felt like my heart was racing a few seconds later My vision had finally come back. I was on the ground, I was trying my best to find out where I was, I thought about it and I realized it was an underground kidnap place. I looked up and then that shadow? I realized that the shadow was 'The Intruder'. I was shivering in fear was I next? Will he kill me?! Will he kidnap me? I had a million questions in one.

I didn't know what to do I felt as if I was stuck to the ground. All I could hear is heavy breathing I felt terrified. I thought he was taking me to hell. The Intruder's face. I don't know he just looked, even more, creepier than before. The slender-like appearance, the thing was tall, very tall. It had empty-handed eye sockets. The terrific experience was awful.

My body finally got up and I tried my best to run as fast as I could. It was just an infinite hallway as if it was in a loop. The heavy breathing was getting louder. But then, it stopped? Why did he stop? When I took it I heard laughter, and everything turned pitch black. I blinked and everything turned red. I couldn't move, I fell to the ground unable to move like I was paralyzed. The Intruder was behind me. A shadow-like hand went for my chest. Before my vision blurred again I saw that my heart had been ripped out. I saw blood everywhere. I felt my soul leaving me even my breath!, suddenly I couldn't handle the pressure and I passed out..?

= Chapter 3 ABYSS = During

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