Thread:ThatCatJizo/@comment-33176737-20181206212444/@comment-34979284-20181222173123

I've continued with the second egg and made some minor adjustments to your part as well. (Don't worry, I didn't change the story whatsoever; I just fixed some typos and small amounts of grammar)

(And don't worry #2, I didn't change the main character's chat with the bunny. I know he's young and likes to shorten words for example 'you' to 'u')