Talk:Death powering!/@comment-37985520-20190202014927

Ok... rating your story: First off, You didn't capitalize anything! Second of all, nice pic :3 Third, put your pic last or your text would be messed up (which it is) Also... why did you put: i t Instead of it? Overall, It was ok! I rate a 4/10! At least there wasn't any BLOOD! I also recommend Grammarly to help with your spelling and word usage!