Talk:Lilith/@comment-34411273-20180311174416

Oh! I didn't realize someone actually made a Creepypasta similar to mine! I'm impressed that someone actually decided to make a story inspired off of mine! The only thing is that you need to get into a little more detail about what happened with Lilith. The grammar certainly isn't the best. I'm not saying that mine is the definition of perfection at all! We both need to improve on our writings. Some of the writing in this story felt a little out of place. For example, how did Lilith automatically get your "address?" How did you know that she went to America? It felt like it lacked the "suspense" that I feel like it needed.

I know, these types of stories play out differently than others. Here's the thing. These types of stories can be/are 100% '''real. '''I also understand if you are a new writer. I can see where some of the mistakes are. If you want to improve on these types of things, keep reading other examples! Learn from your previous mistakes. I admit I made some mistakes in Lillian before it was blocked from editing. I wish I could change some of them now that I look back at it. However, there is always room for improvement in future writings.

Keep writing, keep improving.

By the way, I have one question. Was the username based off of the name Lillianfoxtroph86 (Lillian's account)?