Talk:Red world./@comment-39442597-20200830024340

8.5/10

For the positives, the story maintains itself pretty well and manages to emphasize its own meaning through the listing of events. I liked the way the author specified the disturbing-ness of the game and the distinction between it and the narrator’s own sanity. This type of style and length makes it progressively more dark than most stories on the wiki.

For the negative side there’s really not a lot to list. The only cliches being the character of Jennys_Feelings or the use of Hebrew.

Overall it is a pretty good story, it manages to develop context much more efficiently than other major stories, though it doesn’t entirely qualify as the best. Even then the description of these odd events coupled with the mysterious behaviors of some of the characters entice a much more in depth environment on the reader. While I am not at the moment willing to view the files given throughout the story, I can guarantee they play a key role in developing its meaning.