Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-34872512-20180411055621/@comment-30614152-20180411194456

Please do not use spaces a bit too much, and try to make long paragraphs, but don't make a wall of text!

Are you kidding me, satanic pentagram? Cliche +1.

Too much unnecessary gore... Try to think, and read your story again. And... Improve..

This story is more funny than scary at it's slightest, but hey, that's a good thing since all scary stories don't need to be extra serious, and it can get boring. So, +1 positive point.

I like it when the protagonist started to get insane as time goes on, but it's pretty cliche since it's overused in scary stories. But for me.. Never seen this type of stuff before. As time goes on, his grammar started to get non-existent, and stuff like that.

Being forced to kill your friend is cliche :( It's overused in scary stories.

Overall, 7/10. Bone approved.

~Bone