Talk:A Reason Why (Fake Creepypasta)/@comment-27730508-20190301044246

This review was conducted on February 28th, 2019.

Grammar/Story: Minor errors such as lowercase "I"'s not being capitalized, and things in this creepypasta such as "so I messaged every single friend" should be worded differently (e.g "so I messaged every single one of my friends" or "so I messaged all of my friends"). Errors in "chat" or any messages in-game are mostly intentional in this pasta. People make lots of errors in chat online, so it adds a bit of realism.

General Story: I honestly expected this to be cliche due to it being about a user. But it was not that cliche and a bit original. Although, things like REASONWHO being able to break 2F and User PIN slightly break the realism. I know that all creepypastas are fake (as we all should...) but it sort of breaks immersion without explaination. After all, it is difficult to break 2F and User PIN....

FINAL SCORE: 5/10