Talk:One Last Bang/@comment-27730508-20171114032527

Dang, that's pretty good. 8/10. As soon as you mentioned "graphic pictures" I felt like it was going to be cliche but as I read on I discovered this wasn't the case and was slightly distrubed by the pictures described. I can only find one cliche in this entire peice of writing, pretty impressive on this wikia. Its the part where the game is on the front page despite having visitors. I know this is a cliche just because I've seen many other pastas use this trick, but the writing makes up for it.

Great job.