Talk:Cursed Account/@comment-39442597-20200808224052

7.1/10

For the positive side the story is well-structured and contains excellent punctuation, coupled with the suspense added to it by the protagonist(s) reactions to said occurrences. It also manages to draw the reader in through this, which leads us straight into a surprising climax.

For the negative sides (And yes, you can tell), the story does contain some minor cliches in it, such as the name of the user in question and some of the fonts which were used. Nevertheless the structure manages to draw this down by a partially considerable amount.

Overall this was pretty good, though it had minor setbacks such as some cliches or paragraph errors, even then however it maintains solid structure and suspense through the ending and the center. To put this into further context I liked the way the author drew in more detail, especially since there is no explanation to what exactly was in his daughters game, however in that we can guess based on her reaction and the last update of the story. It also paints this very well in our heads, due to the slight in depth descriptions of the sounds and noises he hears afterwards. It also brings in the question that the protagonist may be insane for all we know. So far this was pretty good, and I wish to see stuff like this again.