Talk:Shinany/@comment-26517914-20151024063806/@comment-25930992-20151025040549

Well, so far it doesn't seem to have much potential to be scary. The formatting is odd, but I don't see how it couldn't work. Other than that, any current scares, and the fact that it's based on ROBLOX really seem to spell disaster in the future. But, who knows, you may end up actually crafting something genuinely creepy.

However, as this is unfinished, I really wonder why you chose to publish it in the first place. I think it's much wiser to write out your story in a word document on your computer, format it in the wikia editor, then publish it. Unfinished stories are usually frowned upon in the creepypasta community as the author tends to never finish it, tends to be of poor quality, and as a resault, have a habit of being deleted.

I'd also reccomend proofreading when you've finished writing so you can correct any spelling or grammar errors, and refine parts of the story that you might later find to be somewhat stupid or nonsensical.