Talk:The Grieving user: BOINGERBOING/@comment-44224445-20200619171500

just your local new pasta critic

So, rather cliched. Bloody models and gore is a big nonononno, dunno if people find that creepy but it's just an overused concept.

Real life skulls? Pictures of dead things are also a big cliched.

The warning at the end, i'm not sure if that's cliche.

Screaming audio? Most likely cliche (i'm just now critiquing stuff, take my shit lightly)

Overall I liked the concept, work on the delivery. Originality is the source of entertaining pastas.