Talk:Don't Join/@comment-36530255-20190611221539

Grammar: Elongated sentances, some other errors that could use adjusting, 5/10

Story: Hardly makes sense, narrator is told not to join by creator but ends up getting pulled in somehow nevertheless. There doesn't appear to be a true motive here, 3/10

Charecter: Aside from the creator whos motive doesn't make any damn sense, the whole charecter thing doesn't matter a whole lot, 10/10

Overall score: 18/30. y dis so populer waaaaaaaaaaaaaah