Talk:The man named ark./@comment-39442597-20201012170226

Updated review:

1.2/10

The story is absolutely horrendous, barely focusing on ROBLOX at all, and constantly overusing random GIFs to add to its own momentum. I’m pretty sure the only reason the reason this appears as popular is because of the links, and if it didn’t contain them it’d probably be much more bland than it already is. The cliches are everywhere, including the story blending into real life and for some reason there being one survivor in trauma. Even if this is supposed to be written like the Pillar of Steel, it has nothing solidifying it whatsoever and what we’re left with is a blend of cliches and dull writing. Not to mention this whole story originated from some guy visiting G0Z’ place, a myth who’s retired nowadays. Yes some of the details can be convincing, however they’re bogged down by the overuse of random plot points conveyed by a really shaky structure.

In a short summary the story doesn’t base itself on structure, instead only relying on the random links to get its point through, though all this does is provide a really predictable and confusing plot, which fails to allocate anything that could revive its motive.

(Essentially it only relies on its use of links, not to mention something like this would garner a lot of backlash on the forums)

Personally I think that this story would have been deleted already if it didn’t have these random links.