Thread:ThatCatJizo/@comment-33319614-20180903141931/@comment-34979284-20180908151016

X Spranp wrote: I fixed some of the cliches. You know that you didn't improve your page at all? You changed, "STICK" to "KATANA", but you didn't change "HIT" to "SLICE". You don't hit somebody with a katana. You SLICE with the katana. You hit with a baseball bat, you cut with a knife, but you slice with a katana or a sword. And there are still a lot of cliches.