Talk:Entity 8188, the horrific attempt at a bot that can think for itself./@comment-32066942-20170814063959

hi! this story is great, though there are some minor issues: this story needs a little bit more.. story? and there's one little grammar/spelling mistake that bothered me ("it's thinking limits", it should be "its thinking limits", as if you were to not use the apostrophe, it would say "it is thinking limits".), but another than it, it's absolutely amazing! i'd love to see a sequel for this.