Talk:HELPME/@comment-25226412-20160322155235

Alright, not trying to be mean, I don't want to be that guy But honestly, it's an 8/10. There's a few cliches, and I recognized some elements (lack of a better phrase) in this story. You got a point knocked off for using an acronym (btw) But you could've gotten a worse rating if you didnt call out a cliche, thats honestly one of the most clever things I have ever seen. It's very good for a third story! Keep it up!