Talk:TheP4rk/@comment-28393559-20181115103527

It's not bad. Grammar is decent.

Tips:

''Although T3XTS L1K3 7H1S is fine, maybe consider changing it? Hackers and stuff don't type that way, otherwise they're just pretending to be scary. It makes it more cliche.''

'''I WANT TO HACK SOME PEOPLE'  Please don't use the word 'hack'. A lot of people overuse the word 'hacker'. And hackers never imply they're hacking, let alone a creepypasta. Perhaps change it to 'I WANT TO KILL SOMEONE' or something.''

'''Overall, not bad! 9/10'''