Talk:Grimblox explained/@comment-28527909-20160908022218

I recommend using a regular story formatting, unless this is meant to be a blog post merely explaining things. The capitalization and grammar as well as word usage could be improved. I felt the entering was excessive and unneccessary after the last few times.

Can't really give this one a rating, but i'm pretty sure it's a excellent story like the others i've read on this wiki.