Talk:Lillian/@comment-30107412-20180321132846

You did very well with your creepypasta. The only thing that you missing is the creepiness. Don't say that is a creepypasta. The effect, grammar, spelling, etc was on top. But don't say that is a creepypasta otherwise the people can just dismiss it as a story and the people won't be that scared. A creepypasta is a story that scared the living hell out of people. I not saying your story sucks is fucking awesome and it made me shiver a bit. But next time if you planning on writing a creepypasta, don't say that is a creepypasta or else nobody will get super scared of it. So, in the end, you get a 9.5/10. Keep writing and Keep improving.