Talk:NewNoobModelIsOut/@comment-32802547-20170923193523

Derf's Ratings!

Grammar: 8/10

Pretty good for someone who isn't in USA or UK, couldn't find many errors.

Cliche: 9/10

Avatar changing, that is the only reason this is cliche at all.

Realism: 7/10

There is no hacking tech for ROBLOX yet that could extract ALL items from one's account, but you came with proof that this was at least somewhat real,

Misc: 4/10

Wall of text, and quite short.

Overall: 28/40

Remember, this is only to help you make better stories here, you still did better than lots of posts I have rated.