Talk:The man named ark./@comment-39442597-20200521205714

4.5/10

I had trouble understanding the story’s plot and motive while reading through, it was hard for me to tell what exactly was happening due to the constant links and switching of topics, the story also doesn’t have much to do with roblox throughout only revolving on characters having a cliche’d event happening to them, such as G0Z appearing, a sign saying “Always Watching” and the “shook it off” feeling. The ending is also stereotypical since everybody dies and there’s one survivor who is in trauma. Although it may be likely we should read through the lines here and it could have a deeper meaning, the story is still hard to keep up with due to random links and turns that don’t make much sense, this looks like something that should go on the Creepypasta wiki to me. I don’t really think this should be popular for newer readers.