H3LP M3

Note and Disclaimer
Hi! This is my first creepypasta so please tell me how I can improve my writing, grammar and.. stuff

Disclaimer: This is a creepypasta and none of this stuff actually happened, remember, all creepypastas are make-believe and made for entertainment, so dont ask stuff like, "Is this real?", ok? Time to get to it!

Chapter 1: The Beginning
*opens camera and mic*

... Hi there, I am Axel, one of the many players in the game called Roblox, a social media gaming platform, but today we will talk about how my experience was in the Roblox game/experience, Funky Friday. This game is a game about rap-battles and music, but today it was weird...

So it started like this:

My little brother and me joined a server in Funky Friday, we didn't want to get bullied by toxic players, so we tried getting into a private server, but it said that Funky Friday didn't support private servers, we thought it was normal at first, so we just joined a public server, and good thing there were no bullies or toxic players, N0 0N3 W4$ Th3R3. So we thought that that was weird, because it was, it was in the middle of the day, and it was a very popular game, did Funky Friday become dead now??? So we just tried to leave, but it wouldn't let us, but my brother successfully leaved the game by powering his tablet off, I was the only one there, I tried doing the alt+f4 trick, but it didn't work, I tried shutting of the computer, but a window popped up saying: "where do you think you're going?" I got scared, then another window popped up and saying, "let's play." I did it, then a player joined the game, his username was H3LP M3, and then we played, the 1st game, he won, the 2nd, I won, but then, at the third game......

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At the third game, we played the music applecore, one of the most hardest music to play in the game, so I put my hands on the keyboard, and the game said 3, 2, 1, GO!, but it was distorted, and it wasn't in the game, I heard it coming from outside, and the moment it started, my hands were glued to the keyboard, I tried pulling the keyboard up, but it's like it's glued to the table, and as I pulled harder, and missed more notes my fingers started to feel more pain and blood started to gush out of my fingers, as the feeling is much like pins and needles poking through my fingers, as we were playing, H3LP M3 said, "H4V1nG 4nY fUn????" and I just stayed there, silent behind my computer, I fainted, then I woke up, in my bed, I thought that was all a dream, and then, I noticed scars on my fingers, I thought that it was real, and I was starting to freak out, I looked at my computer, and it was still open, playing on that same program, it that same roblox game, I sat on the chair, I saw the blood stains on the keyboard, I put my hands on the kyboard, and then it short-circuited, my fingers got fried, I tried to remove them but I felt more pain by the second, and then H3LP M3 appeared....

End
so that's it, that's my roblox creepypasta, part 2 coming soon...

H3LP M3!!!