Talk:Reset 1332/@comment-36086332-20180705084618

Grammar: 9/10 There is minor errors every once and a while but I was okay with them, but oh lord, the massive block of text, it scares me to this day.

Story: 9/10 Just no need to include the real life letter sent to you segment thing.

How long I went through entertained: 10/10

Overall: 27/30

It would be amazing without the wall of text or letter being sent to you, keep writing, if you keep doing it this well, you can go far. Also, it was originally gonna be 28/30 but you said it was a true story, yet this is not fully possible, which is a massive cliche.