Talk:Team Anonymous Hacked Me/@comment-36086332-20180801183847

Grammar:4/10 There is a lot of need for quotation marks and commas, but its just so overwhelming I had to rate it this low. And there are some spelling errors like spelling "clue" as "clew".

Entertainment:5/10 I was kinda bored halfway through.

Logic:4/10 I don't think a random game can somehow delete an account. And some random hackings that would be so hard to pull off, and why are they even targeting YOU of all people?

Spook:3/10 Sometimes you try and scare the reader by just calling things "scary" which really just does the opposite. And your acting like some wannabes "hacking" your account is scary.

Cliches:6/10 Random account deletion. Binary. Them somehow changing someone's about page with no way to access their account. Random powerout.

Overall:22/50 Keep writing, keep improving. And since people like out of 10 values a lot more, you can have one. 4.4/10. Everything needs it's own bit of improvement, just take my advice and you can become one of the top writers one day.