Talk:Sam./@comment-39442597-20200617174630

7.8/10

For the positives, the story does manage to add momentum to itself just not in the regular fashion as these events are directly based on the ones in 4nn1, but yet it isn’t as bad as it considering the evidence given, along with the similar fonts.

For the negatives the story is based directly on 4nn1 and doesn’t draw any differences despite the dialogue, character, and screenshots. It is also shorter than the original but this was likely done to save time. There also is a sense of boredom throughout if you’ve read the original.

Overall I can’t really think of a proper rating since it’s based on 4nn1, but I think the author should think of some better events and not use the plot of other stories. I don’t wish to criticize them since there are some differences which show they can do much in writing, just don’t draw too many parallels if you’re making a sequel or promoting a myth, I liked the similarities, but my advice is try to think of something that will surprise the reader, and read some other trending pages to learn off of them (if you don’t know how to construct a pasta)