Talk:The twitching head/@comment-35734779-20181128174627

Pasta!


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Review!

Grammar: 7/10 minor grammatical errors, but still bearable

Plot: 8/10. The second i read 'smile' I said unoriginal.

Thrill: 6.1/10. Not the most thrilling thing I've read. But then again i have read my pastas so........

Final score: 7.3