Talk:Invisible/@comment-36145153-20180829192148

Analysis:

Grammar: 10/10. Probably the best grammar I’ve seen on this wiki. That’s all there is to it.

Plot: 5/10. A pretty generic plot, but the ending was the cliche ‘if you die in the game, you die in real life.’. I have to say I liked the friend group, but the story felt predictable. There was also no layer of mystery.

Empathy: 2/10. The main character felt generic, and similar to the 4000 other main protagonists.

Thrill: 7/10. I found this to be OK. I wouldn’t suggest it or anything...

FINAL SCORE: 6.3/10. Is this is a first creepypasta?