Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-35633198-20180411234011/@comment-33605900-20180412113027

BlueJustin7693 wrote: All these critiques will be contributing to my next pasta.

http://robloxcreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Silent_Scream it's gotta be at least a 7/10 with the quality of your previous story's, will read in a min