Talk:The Unheard Story of Sabrina Larock and 1996 Voltage/@comment-38945736-20190401163456

You know, there's some major things wrong with this. Sometimes, you have to remember that you're in ROBLOX... Heads of people can't turn, you can't "scream", you can't make out ages in ROBLOX, like how would you know that girl is eleven? It also sure as hell can't pounce on you and dig claws into your flesh. Also, "the girl dissapread a few hours after eating me", were you just there? Sitting for 2 hours, while it was eating and just waiting? Also, you can't say curse wors in ROBLOX, like "oh fuck!". Also, this is suppsoed to be a ghost or something? Zan3_Gam3rYT sounds like some 5 year old making a minecraft channel. "A momo face appeared infront of my eyes" that was the worst thing you could've said, really ruined it. EDIT: I'm not trying to offend you or discourage you from writing. Sorry I seemed a bit harsh lol.