Talk:PR0J3C74B4ND0N3D/@comment-27730508-20171009175630

0/10. Now I'll go into some depth as to why this story has been deemed 'barely readable'. You see, grammar is part of the english languange, and if english isn't your first languange... I'm sorry. Anyways, grammar doesn't seem to exist here, so points off for the lack of grammar skills. Secondly, this story is kinda cliche (blood everywhere you go) the chapters are also too short, which is considered heading abuse to me.

Third, I am aware you have probably made better stories now, but I had to review this because, well... I don't really have a reason to review every pasta I come across. Eh.

- ~Jobie~