Talk:403 Forbidden/@comment-43396091-20190812204657

Grammar: Yep, a few errors. I'm not going to dwell on those, though. They appear here and there and don't really affect the story. 7/10

Plot: An interesting plot. Error 403 instead of Error 404? A creative choice, though I'm not sure how you came to that decision. 6/10

Final rating: 13/20. Could be better, but it's a decent score for your second story.