Talk:Jannete/@comment-36322616-20190502042438

Although your writing(spelling & grammar) is perfect, the plot itself isn't good. Firstly, it's mainly a cliche. Secondly, it's way too short. I'm not saying that shortness is a weakness, but your short story is like an anti-climax one. The story ended before you can write more stuff to creep the reader out.

Anyway, just try to make more creepy things. I appreciate your writing, and I believe you can do A LOT BETTER next time.

Show me your ability!