Talk:BlackHat69x69 - The Roblox Creepypasta Story/@comment-28524264-20170821203154/@comment-28527909-20170821223423

There's a lot of inactive users on this wiki, not to mention, it seems like it has a bunch of cliches. I was briefly skimming through your story and I found at least three cliches. Your grammar and comma placement wasn't the best in this story, but you're on the right track with forming a plot. Keep it up, your stories will most definitely improve!