Talk:The twitching head/@comment-36145153-20180829204053

Analysis

Grammar: 7/10. It’s bearable at least.

Plot: 6/10. There doesn’t seem to be a real ‘plot’. Anyways, the parts were good.

Empathy: 7/10. Conversations are a gateway to good characters. I like the two characters (the writer and SlytherinAlara123).

Thrill: 6/10. When it comes to thrill, the story gets a meh. Maybe if it was longer, it could get a better rating.

Final score: 6.4/10. What most people’s first creepypastas should be something like, maybe worse...