Talk:GreyJoke's Story/@comment-33176737-20181208210441/@comment-33081634-20181209075750

Yeah, this is Roblox. To be honest, you have to expand your story more, use as few cliches as you possibly can, have a good knowledge of words like 'resented' or 'overwhelmed', instead of 'small', 'big', 'nice', etc, etc.