Talk:Endgame/@comment-32802547-20170923175140

Derf's Ratings!

Grammar: 10/10

I haven't seen a single grammatical error in the whole story, perfect capitalization, wording, and periods!

Cliche: 5/10

Rituals are a somewhat original idea, but the thing that makes this cliche, is the star of the creepypasta actually interfering with the owner of the pasta in real life.

Realism: 2/10

This is mostly because of real life interferance.

Misc: 6/10

The text could be split up a little more, and the story is a bit too short.

Results: 23/40

Just like every other rating I post, this is to help the owner make better pastas on the site.