User blog:AppleLeg/AppleLeg's Pasta Of The Week

Welcome jajajajajajajaja

this is pasta of the week bitch

today we're gonna be looking a pasta that i thought was good

ravioli ravioli

whats in the pocketoli

lets see shall we

and the winner is: "Nothing seems right on roblox anymore"

I really like this pasta. It seems like it could be cliche but so far it is GOOD

The story is pretty interesting to read and it fills up with detail which makes it really interesting. It's clear that the writer has some skill in writing already. The author claims that it's their first pasta, which is really really good for a first pasta. There's not that much to say considering that it's short. I really like how the story starts off mysterious, not giving a introduction to the character but talking about the surrondings of the room. This trick has been used in many mysterys, thrillers and other horror books. Many authors use it to make the room seem mysterious in a way.

Anyway, so far this pasta gets an 8/10

I mean I don't really know where the story is going from there but so far is really good. It defilently stands out. Compared to other pastas it would get an 10/10, but I'm being an real critic here so I'll just shove this 8 up into your anus.

But anyway, I hope this pasta doesn't turn cliche. But it is good.

GOODBYE