Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-36483640-20190122172754/@comment-37641686-20190122210145

Cons Regarding this creepypasta, I found it to appear like a joke at first,"He was once a friend to Builderman and was agreed to work with him and to that was unknown to people, he had been fired for eating beans, farting red gas and having to kill a man angrily accidentally at the HQ. He became depressed and sad, he became poor and homeless but he liked eating beans." Also, Bloxwatch pastas are no longer allowed on this site. Overall the ending was far from good, and the note at the end did nothing more than make the reader x out of the tab.

Pros I felt like the idea of a ritual appeared unique for most hacker pastas and that if you had elaborated on it; it could have been a far better pasta.

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