Talk:God-Complex/@comment-28594374-20160603013009

This is pretty good so far, but I don't get why your character was shaking just from his friend saying they couldn't see the catalog. Also, the title don't really match up with the story. If anything, you should've called it something like "tophat_0."

I give it a 6/10 for now, this may change later on once the full story is out.