Talk:The Pillar of Steel/@comment-27730508-20181219031317

This review was conducted on December 18th, 2018. 'NOTE: This review was conducted before the creepypasta was finished. '

Grammar/Spelling: Since this is highly chat log based, it doesn't matter if there are errors within the chat logs. Why? Because people make mistakes in chat and it seems more natural. The 0 days after chapter has no errors.

General Story: An interesting and original one at that! The way it is done seperates it from other pastas of similar nature. Can't wait to see the finished product.

Effort: Good so far.

Score as of December 18th, 2018: 9/10