Talk:Game Fears/@comment-27730508-20171222034520

Unneeded "sub-chapters". Could've just merged with Chapter 3. But other then that I think this is mostly cliche due to the building's contents and the hacker's name. I can also provide an explination for the description. You could've easily planned ahead and changed the description to your username before you could come. Also, a story that declares "NO CRITISIZM!" flunks most of the time because the author is salty at negative comments. It actually only makes people critize you more then you ever know. 0/10