Talk:BLOOD/@comment-27730508-20200318002804

While this story is relatively good, there are some huge flaws towards the end that degrade my opinion of it. The first half of the story (the part before Franklin) is ok, but as some have said the use of cliches is jarring. Using 666 does not make the story scare but instead makes it feel like every other cliche story. The second half of the story is where things get bad. The excessive use of blood really makes the second half feel like it was an afterthought. Overall, 6.5/10.