Thread:Evita128/@comment-34186110-20181219175450

The story looks good and I like the concept and idea of it.

But I got two questions.

First, I think I found a error in the stroy.

In 722 days before, Grant said he made a group and in the next line Red said he's invited to it and in the next one he says Really?

I think that there's a naming error there, and Grant should've said that Red was invited. Or was this error intentional?

Also I was wondering, what's up with the italics? I noticed that sometimes they appear and other times they don't. It makes me wonder if there's going to be a twist involving these. 