Talk:Messages349/@comment-36530255-20190614180742

Grammar: Some errors, but barrable 5/10

Story: Original, interesting concept, and executed in an okay fashion. "blood everywhere" is a bit of a cliché. The mystery is cool. But the ending, well...lets just say it wasn't all that nesssicery. 5/10

Charecter: Doesn't really matter in this case, but the Message349 is SUPER interesting, 10/10

Overall Score: 20/30. Well cooked, but could use some salt.