Talk:He's Here

(WARNING!: This is coming from a new person here! Please do not listen to me if you do not want to!)

Okay. This is good, but too cliched with the words "He's here". I do know this is the whole story but still a little bit too cliched.

Also can you make some stories NOT about Roblox? I haven't looked on your profile yet, I'm sorry! Could you also make some ACTUAL horror stories?

Overall, this story is good. In my opinion, 5½/10 because of the cliche.