Talk:"Is that a noob?"/@comment-27730508-20190304070436

This review was conducted on March 4th, 2019.

Grammar/Spelling; Some grammar/spelling mistakes throughout the story, though none so noticeable or major it subtracts from the story.

General Story: Nice job coming up with this concept. What the "noob" says is true, words can hurt too. I do find it cliche that he starts hearing things IRL, and things happen to him IRL, but at least it's done in a way that's not as cliche as other pastas. It's very difficult to feel bad for the protagonist during the story due to his behavior at the beginning and middle of the story.

Final Score: 6.3/10