Talk:Bacon Hairs/@comment-38827694-20190910090532

Rating time! I know this is unfinished but I'm ready to rate this.

Okay, you had a few questions sentences on the story but it wasn't with "?" at the end of the question sentence.

For example: Brother are you okay.

I corrected it like this: Brother are you okay?

Well, you did capitalize your 'i' so that's good.

I did see the cliches about to come.

your spellings were kinda bad. But, decent enough for me.

and.... your total results are...

6.7/10