Talk:TestVersion/@comment-43539755-20191102091015

I am the hero! sorry, I ate your pasta lol xd I will rate it now:

Clichés: 1/10

Realistic: 5/10

Length: 7/10

Originality: 8/10

Creepiness: 7/10

Overall: 7.1/10

How to improve: [https://robloxcreepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:TelamoonLoL/How_to_make_better_pastas! Click]

Pretty good pasta. Well, sorry but I'm out of words xd. And yea, I found A LOT of grammar mistakes. Ok, I fixed some of them!