Talk:The User M4LUM/@comment-32802547-20170927204101

Derf's Ratings!

Grammar: 10/10

Only errors were you saying  staed instead of stood and  wuite  instead of quite  , so I can count it as perfect still.

Originality: 4/10

People finding out where you live online is overly used in these pastas, but could never even happen anyway. It is used so much I had to rate you 4/10 on this.

Creeps: 7/10

Pretty creepy, still, even if it is cliche, something about it scares me.

Emotion: 1/10

Your emotion was only shown with a "creeped me out a lot" every once and a while, show more than just THAT.

Misc: 9/10

No wall of text, story is only a BIT short, add a few more sentences at the end, in your next pasta for perfect length.

Overall: 31/50

I only do this to help, maybe next time I rate ya, you will be better! ;)