User blog comment:BlueJustin7693/Suggestions for your pastas/@comment-26569846-20171201235340

1. Dark stories don't always have to be dark for every second of it. This includes creepypasta. I've seen light-hearted ones that still managed to remain good.

However, I do have to agree that you should balance the bright rainbows and unicorns parts and dark n' edgy parts of it, being a horror story and all. Try and make the predictable unpredictable.

2. A story doesn't have to have dialog to be good. I do, however, agree that it's good to organize your stories instead of leaving them as huge walls of text, so that way it won't hurt the reader's eyes.

3. Yes, it's good to describe how you feel, it definitively makes it less dull. The protagonist doesn't have to be scared by everything, just so you know.

For instance, somebody used to horror games might stay stoic the whole way through the creepy experience, or somebody who hasn't been exposed to disturbing things that much might end up screaming.

Yes, this is indeed agreeable, but some of these are really more of opinions than facts. However, with a few changes, this could definitively help with the organization of a story.