Talk:4nn1/@comment-36530255-20190611221112

Grammar: Great English, well written 10/10

Story: Somewhat realistic, the little girl's personality with her grammar is over exaggerated and cringeworthy, but thats just my opinion and that part doesn't really matter, 9/10

Charecters: Heckin' great! Little girl is somewhat realistic, narrator has great vocabulary, always with lively wording, 10/10

Overall score: 29/30. dah best