Talk:Hunted/@comment-27574556-20180719001648

4.5/10 Has some length, some plot, overall cliche, especially with the "the exit button disappeared aaaaaaaaa", "if i die in the game something bad happens irl aaaaaaaaa", and "realistic blood aaaaaaaaa". Grammar needs to be fixed, and people just generally don't like walls of text. Also, improve your sentence structure (i.e. not this) "So i played a couple of rounds and he keeps following me so i gid and he never saw me but he was the murderer i was so lucky i hid but suddenly he murdered a guy near me instead of lying on the floor it was bleeding and the body was all covered on blood and he was looking for me but me and 2 other people are alive so i tried to find the sheriff's gun but i cant find it but i was shocked when i saw the other guy killed by the murderer with the relvolver and the message written on top of the screen when two players only on the round instead of that it says IM COMING FOR YOU." and you will have much better pastas. Just some constructive criticism.