Talk:385216N/@comment-30144972-20170225171422

Analysis:

Grammar: 9/10 (I found no grammatical errors, but one thing that bothered me that ROBLOX is supposed to capitalized instead of "roblox".)

Originality: 10/10 (This is a unique story. I haven't seen anything like it!)

Plot: 5/10 (First of all, how did the protagonist found a unique user like this one? Secondly, how would the protagonist know of the account, especially after a few months later before he found the account? It didn't state that the protagonist didn't document it anywhere.)

Empathy: 7/10 (I would be left clueless if something like that happened to me, and you got the reactions on point. However, there was one main flaw. Why come back to the account after a few months in time? I would've left the situation for good because it was probably an alternative account.)

Thrill: 8/10 (It was really entertaining to read it! I constantly wondered what will happen next while reading this. You have made a great story!)

FINAL SCORE: 7.8/10