Miserable Humor

Before Reading this:
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Prologue
''Joe, an average Middleschooler, recieved 30 bucks as a gift for his birthday, and all he had in mind was: Roblox Gift cards. Yes, he liked Roblox, or, loved Roblox. He plays it every day, with his friends, even his parents...''

''But all that is about to change. Roblox, the funny, joyful game platform, could drive him into insanity, over and over again tormenting, and playing with his mind. Yes, it is humorous, but it's desperate, miserable humor.''