User blog comment:FunnyKirby110/the red bloxxer/@comment-25593679-20141125194753

Has a few usual points like "666" and the grammar is a little off, but the story still interested me enough to read it. It was a very nice attempt. Next time, add your stories by scrolling to the top and clicking on "Contribute" and then "Add new page." This will unlock more options and allow other people to edit things such as grammar. Otherwise, nicely done! 6/10