Talk:Friends (0)/@comment-32930609-20171122162621/@comment-27730508-20171122164409

"Pretty good"

I beg to differ @Infinityboy

Even though all our first pastas are total disasters, I'm still going to point out why this pasta is.. well... not good. Right off the bat, it's too short. Short creepypastas usually don't have any actual plot or story to it (sometimes they do) but if it's THIS short then there's no room for development anywhere.

Secondly, don't use guests in your pasta for ANYTHING. This has been overdone and used over, and over, and over, and OVER again. No seriously, look on the wikia and you'll find at least 1 guest related pasta. Anyways, you shouldn't add random events to your pasta just to add them.

1/10