Talk:Card Code/@comment-5847257-20150426190401

7/10

Not a bad Creepypasta, but hard to understand with the grammar/speech.

A few things that made my scare-fuel decrease:

• The improper grammar makes it difficult to read.

• The ending is a bit.. Rushy..

• Not enough suspense. A little "too much" actions.

• Some actions made it a bit over-used. The word "blood" is over-used. Try using less blood.

That's my review in my opinion. :)