Talk:DynaBlocks 2005 Beta Build/@comment-34979284-20200812173532

It was pretty alright for your first pasta. I mean, the plot had a couple of clichés here and there, but other than that, it was creepy. Of course, the grammar wasn't the best, but I'm sure you'll improve over time.

I have a tip for ya: Add the Grammarly extension to your browser. This should only take a few seconds. It marks spelling and grammar errors in your text and gives you suggestions on how to correct them. Don't feel forced to buy the premium version, however. The free version is more than enough to make this story a much more enjoyable read.