Talk:GET OUT/@comment-32315441-20171210144053

I'll rate a 5/10. My reasons for this are listed below:

Bad:

"Meeting someone in a game" cliche

"Screaming" cliche

"Creepy face" cliche

"Changed Roblox website" cliche

"Something happening in real life" cliche

"Unable to leave" cliche

Bad spelling and grammar.

Short story.

Good:

Somewhat creepy.

A good idea.

Overall:

A decent story overall, but it has way  too many cliches.