Talk:Smile for the camera!/@comment-43539755-20191101121835

I'm the greatest villain! I ate your pasta and now I will rate it:

Creepiness: 7/10

Clichés: 1/10

Realistic: 6/10

Originality: 7/10

Length: 8/10

Overall: 6/10

How to improve: [https://robloxcreepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:TelamoonLoL/How_to_make_better_pastas! Click here!]

Your pasta isn't bad! The biggest problem is clichés. Try to make pasta without any clichés. I hope you will improve! :)