Talk:Don't Join/@comment-36145153-20180916193342

Analysis

Grammar: 1/10. Someone, get a big oof in here! The grammar in this is weird, like ‘fricked’. What does that even mean? Also USE THOSE TITLES MADE WITH THE TWO = PLEASE!

Plot: 4/10. The plot was very bizarre and I wasn’t able to really grip it. From just looking over it, I see ‘crashing games’ and ‘guests killing’.

Empathy: 5/10. I might remove this category from my analysis because sometimes I have nothing to say, like here.

Thrill: 4/10. Lots of simple cliche messages and stuff make it hard to fear. Also, if you’ve read my analysis in the past, I prefer creepypastas that use a lot of images. Here, the image does nothing, for some reason.

Final Score: 3.9/10. HOW IS THIS THE MOST VISITED ARTICLE!?