Talk:Golden Door/@comment-36530255-20190613152346

Grammar: not the best, a lot of sentances don't make sense, what is "Two Hundred of my friends were not online. 0 of them where online..." supposed to mean? And, "Let me tour you"? There are a bunch of other mix-ups like this as well, also, unessicery capitalizations, 1/10.

Story: A bit cliché with the whole "devil worshipers" thing. Other than that, the cool mystery continues, I'd like to see how it turns out. But what do the Robux scams have to do with the group?, 5/10.

Charecters: Doesn't really matter in this case, 10/10.

Overall Score: 16/30. Has potential.