Talk:Hallways/@comment-43539755-20191101141943

I am a hero! Sorry I ate your pasta lol xd I will rate it now:

Clichés: 1/10

Creepiness: 6/10

Originality: 6/10

Length: 8/10

Realistic: 8/10

Overall: 6.5/10

How to improve: [https://robloxcreepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:TelamoonLoL/How_to_make_better_pastas! Click here to improve!]

Ok so this pasta is not really creepy, but it's realistic. Don't use words like "Bloody blood" (This is a cliché). Anyways, this pasta is not terrible, but it's also not perfect.