Talk:My creepypasta/@comment-36145153-20180830072718

Analysis

Grammar: 6/10. Don’t know what to say here.

Plot: 3/10. Doesn’t seem to have a plot. You’re just telling me facts about a hacker. All I can piece together, is that this is unfinished.

Empathy: 1/10. See Plot.

Thrill: 3/10. Just another hacker story begging for improvement.

Final Score: 4.6/10. It’s a solid start