Thread:Itzphoen1xcraft/@comment-37641686-20181216005602/@comment-37641686-20181216010857

Thanks! Also, did you ever read the pasta Yugder? It was really bad when I first reviewed it and tabuu suggested to fix the grammar mistakes. I left the clichés in but I think I made it partially better can you check it out and tell me if it's slightly better than before?