Thread:Wolfman5580/@comment-33911359-20200726103319/@comment-34186110-20200726114504

https://robloxcreepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:157513

Six months ago, you asked why your story was deleted. I posted this.

https://robloxcreepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/Posting_Guidelines

The very first thing it tells you is, put it in your userblog if you don't want the story deleted.

There are so many things wrong with this story.

First it starts out with telling the person and knowing every detail about how they join Roblox.

Then he was the 666th user. Classic cliche.

Then 5 years later, he decides to log onto Roblox and kill someone? Why? How? He didn't do that before.

"He was greeted by an empty server. One anonymous player recounts what happened." What? This makes no sense. First it was a empty server, then there was one player there, then there was actually two people there?

For whatever reason, the "survivor" knows it was Jdogie and had to leave quickly. Even though Jdogie was gone from Roblox for 5 years and didn't do anything to anyone before that.

"The avatars became super realistic and bloody." Nice cliche.

And Vault Omega makes no sense. I feel like you just wrote all that, because of Vault 8166.

Next time you don't want your story deleted. Put it in your Userblog.