User blog comment:TelamoonLoL/Happy Birthday, James./@comment-39061204-20191028141905

Good Job! It's scary, it's weird, and it gave me some shivers reading this story.

Ranking:

Creepiness: 9/10 (This actually disturbed me)

Cliches: 1/10 (Surprising)

Originality: 10/10 (Original Spooky Story)

Realistic: 10/10 (It sounds like it would be on the news)

Overall: 30/40 (You should make a sequel! This is a not bad story.