Talk:Server 11/@comment-27730508-20171014060528

Alright Jewel, this creepypasta is not as bad as some of the other ones I’ve seen on this wiki (cough Diary of a Girly Kid) anyway, this story does have cliches, but the cliches are made up for by the fact that your grammar is in point. Also because the use of the cliches is not horrible in this case. I’m not sure if the reason I like this a little is because of the general structure of this story, or if it’s because of your (*not parentheses at the end***) style of writing this not excellent but not horrible Pasta

Trust me, if this was a really bad pasta I’d go full ham on it

-~Jobie P.S. <3 P.P.S: the previous P.S. was written by my dumb brother