Talk:Faked/@comment-27730508-20171122203602

Tip: Don't use so many line breaks

Also tip: Maybe use a header instead for "Part 1" because it looks better in my humble opinion.

3/10

PS: Errors are a bit overdone but that's okay.

If the grammar mistakes are supposed to be there, ok. But if they're not, please fix them. For example "I played for a while. and got some endings. but.." should be "I played for a while, and got some endings, but.."