Talk:FACEFREAZE/@comment-35113642-20180204155757

I'd give it a 7/10. It certainly has some cliches (http://robloxcreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Clich%C3%A9s), you could check the guide to writing (http://robloxcreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Roblox_Creepypasta%27s_Guide_to_Writing) and you could check our quality standards (http://robloxcreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Site_Rules/Quality_Standards). However, it has grammar, it has detail, it has perfect spelling. If you could make it more scary and make it longer, this would definitely be better.