Talk:Login/@comment-26852183-20180226014950

Good story, but maybe kind of break it down so it isn't one huge paragraph, unless that is what you are going for of course. Also, in the beginning it seems kind of all over the place. And near the end i got kind of lost. But overall a good story, pretty creepy and almost realistic. Check out mine: http://robloxcreepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Solace000