Talk:The Invasion/@comment-34619098-20190922104921

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The story's alright, but clarity is a bit unclear.

For example:

1. The phrase it is my belief may be unnecessarily wordy. Consider replacing the noun with a corresponding word.

2. 'Reply back' creates a tautology.

Also a few mistakes with grammar, however, they are minor mistakes.

Advanced Mistakes,

5 Passive Voice Misuse

3 Punctuation in Compound/Complex Sentences.

3 Word Choice

1 Inappropriate Colloquialisms