User blog:JoeBee James/Why “Dont Join” sucks

First of all I’d like to say that I’m not trying to attack anyone, just giving my personal opinion on this story.

Reason 1: Grammar

Grammar is an important part of everyday language and writing. When it’s used it can make your writing fluent and have superb quality. However, when you don’t, you sound like a 4 year old who just got his computer. This story sounds like that.

Reason 2: Plot Plot is another important part of of story writing. When a plot is good, you could end up on bestsellers, but when you have the stupidest plot ever, your story is hated by many, including the comments section.

Reason 3: Overused cliche Cliches are overused jokes or elements of a story that are usually unwanted. This story’s cliche is the used of guests and “creepy” writing

Hope the author learns from this.

---~Jobie (talk) 15:01, October 1, 2017 (UTC)