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The Scary Day

One Day I Was With My Mum At The Shop.

Then I Went Home And Played ROBLOX Playing "JailBreak"

While Playing "JailBreak" A Hacker Named "Guest 666" Joined The Game.

He Had A Scary Smiley Face. I Was Scared And Left And Went On "Natural Disaster Survival".

But Then He Joined My Game. I Told Him To Go Away Then All Of A Sudden I Died On "Natural Disaster Survival" For No Reason At All Entirely.

I Said He Was A Bad Hacker Then My Computer Shut Down.

When I Opened It Up My Wallpaper Was A Picture Of Blood That Is Red And I Had A Weird File Not Downloaded By Me "Demon.exe".

I Went On Demon.exe And Then There Was Nothing Not A Thing.

But My Mum Came In My Room She Said That My Brother Was In A Horrible Accident And He Didn't Survived But It Was A Car Crash And Apparently On His Car Was "Demon.exe"

Did Guest 0 Kill My Brother We Will Never Know.