Talk:One Last Bang/@comment-28527909-20171114032832

Ooh, this was superb! There's a few cliches but the clean format and clear plot really overpower the cliches. I adore the way you expressed your feelings and your thoughts rather than just telling the readers "I thought about this". An excellent piece of work from you as always with the minimal spelling errors and comma splices. I'm so glad you wrote one last story, this was spectacular! Kudos to you, Sammi!