Talk:A F K/@comment-36086332-20180801182010

Grammar:9/10 In the sentence "and the one’s I had lived far away." "one’s" shouldn't have the     " ' ". and as it turns out, that is literally the only error I could find.

Spook:4/10 It is alright in that department, it didn't really spook me out that much though, not exactly an explanation.

Cliches:9/10 Really the only cliche was that you couldn't close the game. Nothing else though.

Logic:9/10 How could that figure's face transfer to YOU? But that's the only problem.

Enjoyment:7/10 Pretty nice in that department, I did get a bit bored but the end twist made up for it.

Overall: 38/50 Quite well made, and if you want an out of ten, then here ya go: 7.6/10. You don't even need much improvement, but a little work and you will have a pretty darn high rating.