Talk:The gray roblox character/@comment-38827694-20190625112517

Yay More pasta to eat!

Creepiness:8/10

Overused cliches. but some of the parts got into me, Could use a bit of salt there on your pasta.

Fairly long: 7/10

Spellings:8/10 Found a few errors of your spellings. fixed it, it should be fine now;

Grammar:9/10 Nice grammar!

It's this stereotype of overused cliches. but since it had a few parts that scared me. Guess could be considered this fairly good. but buddy. Don't miss your English lessons next time :p