Talk:He is dying/@comment-31990809-20180922022041

Undertale Reference, Cliffhanger ending (I mean why suddenly he felt fine when most of everyone he knew died?) Quite sorta on the edge with most of the "BLOOD AND DEATHS"

Overall I give this a 4/10

It needs less of detail on the kills and more sense.

Plus shouldn't the main character call the police or scream for help? I mean just saying "it was so weird even if my parents were hanged and my school burned to the dust"

It'd make more or less sense on how the main character reacts to the situation and how scared he really is